Thank you for labelling these so clearly! I can't tell whether the widowed line in 3 is purposeful or a mistake (it looks like a mistake) and if the spillover from one column to the next in 4 is a mistake, sloppiness or purposeful. I can't see how they would express the content of the text, so I'm guessing they are a result of the former - sloppiness. (same goes for 2 and the uneven columns)
Disappointing because everything sits nicely on the page and they follow the brief appropriately...but when you have so much space and so little text, there's no excuse for text slippage!
Thank you for labelling these so clearly! I can't tell whether the widowed line in 3 is purposeful or a mistake (it looks like a mistake) and if the spillover from one column to the next in 4 is a mistake, sloppiness or purposeful. I can't see how they would express the content of the text, so I'm guessing they are a result of the former - sloppiness. (same goes for 2 and the uneven columns)
ReplyDeleteDisappointing because everything sits nicely on the page and they follow the brief appropriately...but when you have so much space and so little text, there's no excuse for text slippage!